Thursday, 9 May 2013

Script Draft

The script was originally written by Reece Ronan, but then re-written by myself twice and developed by myself.
                                                                                                                                        FADE IN:
2      INT. JAY AND NIKKI’S BEDROOM - JAY’S HOUSE -- MORNING      2

Jay wakes up drowsy and achy, with a pain in the back of his head; he checks the time on his watch.

Jay wearily tries to get out of bed, he pauses and sits on the edge staring at the window.


WIDE SHOT OF JAY STARING AT THE WINDOW


LOW ANGLE CLOSE UP FROM FLOOR OF JAY WALKING OUT OF THE ROOM

He walks down the hall to the bathroom. A light flickers, he taps it, and the light still proceeds
to flicker, Jay hears a noise, distant yet somehow familiar.
                                                                         VOICE
                                                       Don't take them, vile, soiled
 Jay ignores it and proceeds to enter the bathroom.


3      INT. BATHROOM                                             3

Jay goes over to the cabinet above the toilet and takes out a bottle of pills. “Invega” and
“Schizophrenia” are printed on the side along with the instructions. He steps over to the sink and
gazes into the mirror, contemplating whether to take his medication.
                                                                         VOICE
                                                       Don’t do it.




                                                                                                                            JUMP CUT TO:
4      INT. HALLWAY                                              4

Jay walks down the hallway. Not noticing that the light has stopped flickering.
                                                                       JAY
                                                   (Raised Voice) Nik? Leo? Anyone here?
Jay again hears a voice, this time it is coming from the kitchen. He decides to investigate.
kitchen. He decides to investigate.


5      INT. KITCHEN                                              5

Jay walks into the kitchen, the sun glaring through the window blinds Jay for a few seconds. Leo is
cooking bacon, eggs and various other food for breakfast; Nikki is sitting at the table, drinking a
glass of orange juice. Both are around 20; Leo is handsome, charming and well dressed;
Nikki is beautiful in her own way, quiet and timid.
                                                                 LEO
                                                 Ah, here he is, sleeping beauty!
Jay walks over to the table where Nikki is sitting.
                                                                NIKKI

                                                  Hey you.
                                                                JAY
                                                  Hi.
Jay bends down and kisses Nikki.
                                                               LEO
                                                 Where’s mine? Do I get a nice hello?
                                                              JAY
                                                 Morning Leo.
Jay sits down, Leo pours him a cup of tea.
                                                              LEO
                                                So where the hell were you last night?
Leo sits down at the table with his breakfast in his hand.
                   
                      CLOSE UP OF JAY DRINKING TEA LOOKING IN PAIN.
                                                              JAY
                                               You know where I was...
                                                              LEO
                                            In bed I bet, ah well, missed a decent night.
The pain in the back of Jay’s head gets worse.
                                                            NIKKI
                                             You alright? You look a bit pale.

                                                             JAY
                                        I'm not feeling great. I’m going back to bed.
Jay slowly begins to get out of his chair.
                                                             LEO
                                        What!? Were meant to be going out today!
Jay phases out of the conversation, only hearing what is in his head.


                              EXTREME CLOSE UP OF JAY’S EYES.

                                                        VOICE
                                       Why trust them? They hate you.
                           OVERHEAD SHOT OF CUP OF TEA SWIRLING.
                                                          LEO

                                                         Jay!?

                                                      NIKKI

                                           Leave him alone, can’t you see that he’s not well.

Jay rushes out of the kitchen, the door slamming behind him.

                                                      NIKKI (CONT’D)
                                                       Jay?

6      INT. JAY AND NIKKI’S BEDROOM - JAY’S HOUSE -- MORNING,NEXT DAY

  Jay is woken up with a shock, as if he was in a nightmare, hearing screams that sound like Nikki. 
  He suddenly rises up from his bed in fear.
                                                       JAY
                                                 Nikki! Nikki!
7      INT. BATHROOM                                             7

Jay is standing in front of the mirror, staring at himself.
                                                 VOICE 
                               She’s not here...Not around...hates you.
8      INT. LIVING ROOM                                          8

Nikki is sprawled out on the sofa watching the TV with the volume on maximum. Jay walks in, tired 
and aggravated.
                                                     JAY

                                 Turn it down, it’s bloody loud.



Nikki picks up the remote and quickly turns down the TV.
                                                   NIKKI
                             Sorry. How’s your head? Feeling any better?
                                                   
                                                   JAY

                                Worse.
Jay takes his coat off the hanger and puts it on in a rush.

                                                 NIKKI
                                Where are you going?
                                                
                                                  JAY

                                    Out.

Jay hears a knock on the door, he cautiously walks towards it. He hears it again, and again. 
Getting more repetitive and louder until the point it becomes unbearable. He can see a silhouette 
of Leo in the frosted glass door. Jay quickly opens the door and finds that no one is there.


               CLOSE UP OF JAY’S REACTION WITH LEO BEHIND HIM.

Leo creeps up behind Jay without him realising.
                                               LEO
                                   What you doing?

                                               JAY

                                     Going out.
Jay gently closes the door as he walks out.




9      EXT. LAKE - DAY                                           9

Jay is sitting on a bench in front of a lake, trying to calm his mind. For the first time in the 
past few days he can’t hear any voices.

Jay picks up a stone and throws it into the lake. Out of nowhere he can hear footsteps.
                                                  VOICE
                                  What is he doing?
                                                  VOICE 2
                                   What’s wrong with him?
He begins to hear people talking about him, but no one is around. The voices begin to get more 
frequent and louder.
                                                  VOICE

                                    What a loser.
                                            
                                                 VOICE 2
                                     Loner.

                                                 VOICE 3
                                    Got problems.

The voices OVERWHELM Jay, he holds his head in his hands in ANGER.
                                                  
                                                 JAY
                                (Quietly) Shut up. Shut up. Shut up.
The voices get progressively louder and violent that he can’t understand them anymore.

                                               JAY (CONT’D)
                                (Screams) Shut up!
Jay in anger slams his hands down on the bench and frantically gets up; he begins to run home with 
the voices still toying with his mind.

He sprints past a church and into a graveyard, tripping and stumbling as he runs.

Voices laugh at him.
                                             JAY (CONT’D)
                                   Leave me alone!

In the distance Jay can see a figure to his left and another to his right. As he gets closer he can 
see that it is Leo and Nikki. Nikki is crying while Leo is laughing.

In shock and confusion, Jay falls to the ground. When he pulls himself up they have gone.


10     EXT. JAY’S HOUSE - AFTERNOON                             10

Jay sprints towards his front door, panting and out of breath. Heart is beating rapidly and loudly, 
voices out of control in his mind.

Jay bursts through the front door.


11     INT. HALLWAY - JAY’S HOUSE                               11

As the door slams behind Jay the voices suddenly stop. He puts his back against the door, trying to catch his breath. All we can hear is his heart beating.

Jay wearily wanders into the living room.

12     INT. LIVING ROOM                                         12

The TV has been left on, as Jay walks through the room he hears a voice.
                                          ADVERT
                                Waste of space
He turns around and a presenter on an advert is talking to him.

                                      ADVERT (CONT’D)
                              What you looking at?
He begins to hear voices all around him.

                                    VOICE
                             Look over here?

                                    VOICE 2
                            No over here?

                                    VOICE 3
                             Oi! Loser.

                                    ADVERT

                          Stop wasting space and buy one of these new storage units!

Jay frantically looks around, getting worked up by the voices playing with him.

                                   JAY
                           (Shouts) Just stop!
A hand (Nikki) reaches out and touches his shoulder. Not knowing who it is he turns around and 
pushes them away.

Nikki trips over and falls onto the edge of a glass coffee table, cutting her head open and 
knocking her unconscious.

All of the voices end, Jay still in shock of what he has done, falls to his knees. He lays Nikki in 
his arms, not knowing what to do.

Leo is standing in the doorway. Jay looks up towards Leo.
                                   LEO
                       What are you doing?
SHOT REVERSE SHOT BETWEEN LEO AND JAY.

Leo looks down at his arms where Nikki was and there is no one there.
                                                                                                               FADE TO BLACK.



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